Reflection:

My views on this pitch are that it went well as going through the slides I explained what was already on the slide very well as I explained it in more detail than it already was and I think describing my mock-ups went really well as I went into a lot of detail and also referred to my research when it came to explaining my recipe page and also the other pages as I gave an insight on what they will look when I eventually make the magazine, what I also really liked when creating the pitch is that I took most my time analysing the pages for my secondary research as when I’m going to create my magazine pages and I’m stuck with how to make them look better I can go back and look at my detailed notes and see what they did and magpie it to use it in my own article, another thing I thought went well is  the way I laid out the whole PowerPoint as it’s in its own section on the PowerPoint and if people don’t know what I’m talking about they can just look at the title to understand what I’m talking about on that page. What I didn’t like about the pitch was that I missed out on a few stuff on it so I had to go back and add to it which lead to me taking more time on other stuff so my pitch took longer to record, I also didn’t like the way I kept on running out of things to say when I was explaining and then a long pause of silent so tip for next time I will prepare what I’m going to say about each slide before starting to record the pitch or otherwise I just fun out of things to say so there were long pauses of silence which I can improve for next time.