This is my most updated version and most likely to be my final product, the things I've added differently to my original magazine copy I got on the website that i missed key things such as the price tag for the magazine and with some of my designs I've just had to add a few things as I got some feedback from my target audience to see how I can make it the way they want to see it, the kind of things I've gotta change on my designs is just little details such as the colour background for my recipes I needed to make it lighter so it's not as daul, I've also had to make extra steps as most of my recipes were too short and too big so I had to split up some of the steps to make it look longer and so it's much smaller so I don't have to make the text big to make it take up the blank space, other little details such as my protein advert I added a QR code on the advert so if anyone is interested in the stuff they can scan the qr code and it will take them straight to the website where you can go get the products from.